tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post6768193296718342547..comments2023-11-02T03:51:08.807-07:00Comments on Day Labor, the Official blog of Crimefactory Magazine: My Brother's Keeper by Brian LindenmuthAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-59276956997584486552011-03-13T12:43:22.641-07:002011-03-13T12:43:22.641-07:00Brian, this is wonderful, and you took me where I ...Brian, this is wonderful, and you took me where I did not expect to go.Naomi Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005429772070247806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-56090898291967011662011-03-11T10:36:13.419-08:002011-03-11T10:36:13.419-08:00I really liked this piece. It reminded me No Count...I really liked this piece. It reminded me No Country for Old Men. Very powerful and subtle.chad rohrbacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02108600205697375432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-86594412569152642582011-03-03T02:03:14.748-08:002011-03-03T02:03:14.748-08:00Families and how to survive them. This is wonderfu...Families and how to survive them. This is wonderful. Powerful stuff.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-72299058585579019672011-03-02T22:59:37.041-08:002011-03-02T22:59:37.041-08:00Fine work. Poignant and strong. Nice characterizat...Fine work. Poignant and strong. Nice characterizationR L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-33016918814707485572011-03-01T15:16:32.105-08:002011-03-01T15:16:32.105-08:00I was uncertain, given the heavy volume of back st...I was uncertain, given the heavy volume of back story at the beginning, if I would cotton to this. It wound up being one of my favorites of the challenge roster. You tackled a courageous theme and, with powerful and cleverly constructed sentences, you drive it into us. This manages deep observation, surprise, lyricism, quietude and force, all within 800 words. Great work.M. C. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088827164403855506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-72447626334131621532011-03-01T09:02:53.057-08:002011-03-01T09:02:53.057-08:00A lot packed into a short piece. Great work.A lot packed into a short piece. Great work.Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-17696551460947125402011-03-01T07:08:17.692-08:002011-03-01T07:08:17.692-08:00I'll repeat what others have already said. A m...I'll repeat what others have already said. A moving, beautifully written story, Brian.Anita Pagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06542864159416870373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-33686924484904701112011-03-01T05:54:39.585-08:002011-03-01T05:54:39.585-08:00Nice one, Brian! So when are we going to see the ...Nice one, Brian! So when are we going to see the "Teddy Bears" published somewhere?sandra seamanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09786095189231150008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-67078342502605145932011-02-28T23:53:55.025-08:002011-02-28T23:53:55.025-08:00Great mood to this one. Excellent.Great mood to this one. Excellent.Eric Beetnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12504563937840205835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-47082925896766303552011-02-28T20:03:55.940-08:002011-02-28T20:03:55.940-08:00A top-notch narrative.A top-notch narrative.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-7724407853733673252011-02-28T13:43:02.950-08:002011-02-28T13:43:02.950-08:00The reviewer writes! Great job and an act of coura...The reviewer writes! Great job and an act of courage, Brian. Congratulations!EAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11427618205516183976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-87279576832042358162011-02-28T12:35:41.663-08:002011-02-28T12:35:41.663-08:00Ditto from me, Brian. Lovely writing.Ditto from me, Brian. Lovely writing.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-73682156156393180352011-02-28T12:25:44.410-08:002011-02-28T12:25:44.410-08:00Thanks guysThanks guysBrian Lindenmuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02519203797661128049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-56524367940784998982011-02-28T10:02:45.627-08:002011-02-28T10:02:45.627-08:00What they said.What they said.Jerry Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482856733981933159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-34305276606857313832011-02-28T08:33:47.239-08:002011-02-28T08:33:47.239-08:00I agree with Patti. This is great.I agree with Patti. This is great.WellesFanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16063771443019228190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-3968159660389280312011-02-28T07:32:14.734-08:002011-02-28T07:32:14.734-08:00Hey, you need to write more stories, Brian. Really...Hey, you need to write more stories, Brian. Really poignant and lovely writing.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.com