tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post8353034250729642441..comments2023-11-02T03:51:08.807-07:00Comments on Day Labor, the Official blog of Crimefactory Magazine: Nueva Localización by Jimmy CallawayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-49146887568311491672011-03-03T16:49:52.198-08:002011-03-03T16:49:52.198-08:00Nice spare writing and natural dialogue. Great use...Nice spare writing and natural dialogue. Great use of subtext.R L Kelstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11080532716601038457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-1036446107049194212011-03-01T17:13:43.258-08:002011-03-01T17:13:43.258-08:00Jimmy, I need to buy you a slice. The narrative w...Jimmy, I need to buy you a slice. The narrative weaving on this is great and inventive. And that's not bullshit.Kieran Sheahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16681787953865476304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-79349036249708619972011-03-01T14:18:01.404-08:002011-03-01T14:18:01.404-08:00I echo all the praise laid here so far. That goes ...I echo all the praise laid here so far. That goes especially for AJ and Eric. Great to have you back in the fire and to listen to what fumes out.<br /><br />These really are scars, man. I love how you sewed up each with the closure of another moment of vulnerability by neglect and time's passing. That's the way to heal all wounds, they say.<br /><br />Stories like this, that incite echoes, make you wonder, though.M. C. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00088827164403855506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-55252555998791854272011-03-01T07:02:34.091-08:002011-03-01T07:02:34.091-08:00Loved it, man. Cool.Loved it, man. Cool.Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-67868717219909961712011-02-28T23:46:33.384-08:002011-02-28T23:46:33.384-08:00Ahh, that Callaway dialogue. I love it so.Ahh, that Callaway dialogue. I love it so.Eric Beetnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12504563937840205835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-41632189228358799642011-02-28T19:17:28.754-08:002011-02-28T19:17:28.754-08:00Tense writing. Each vignette feels like a neck cou...Tense writing. Each vignette feels like a neck could snap at any moment.Benjamin Sobieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343962892479384825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-46358365134804293772011-02-28T18:32:58.351-08:002011-02-28T18:32:58.351-08:00Write'n from experience again, hey Jimmy? Well...Write'n from experience again, hey Jimmy? Well, good shit. Keep it, uh,...up. Yeah.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-13670229788021773072011-02-28T13:59:00.529-08:002011-02-28T13:59:00.529-08:00You're all making me verklempt. Kisses for al...You're all making me verklempt. Kisses for all your faces.Jimmy Callawayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725548493403210066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-32011882875527976332011-02-28T12:56:52.895-08:002011-02-28T12:56:52.895-08:00Perfect. Natural, touching, funny. Mr C!Perfect. Natural, touching, funny. Mr C!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-29457759048184454932011-02-28T11:37:25.997-08:002011-02-28T11:37:25.997-08:00Excellent work, Jimmy. Flowing dialog and salient ...Excellent work, Jimmy. Flowing dialog and salient details.Chris Rhatiganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05769089157184374652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-46642192049821886462011-02-28T10:33:44.598-08:002011-02-28T10:33:44.598-08:00I love all the minor connections of the story. Smo...I love all the minor connections of the story. Smooth and tight, Callaway.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-60294896839541699972011-02-28T09:56:31.407-08:002011-02-28T09:56:31.407-08:00Ladies love outlaws. Good work.Ladies love outlaws. Good work.Jerry Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482856733981933159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-22584795919144627452011-02-28T09:28:29.711-08:002011-02-28T09:28:29.711-08:00I've never had a problem suspending my disbeli...I've never had a problem suspending my disbelief with a JC story, but this one rings especially true to me.Garnett Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06178379155076891183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-73964157771423881072011-02-28T09:11:12.452-08:002011-02-28T09:11:12.452-08:00Watch it, Callaway. You keep writing stuff like th...Watch it, Callaway. You keep writing stuff like this, you're gonna get seriously famous and you <i>know</i> how much you'd hate that. I know you a long time, man. Been waiting for you to jump back in the fire. 'bout time. Cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-53269173599004921762011-02-28T08:20:51.207-08:002011-02-28T08:20:51.207-08:00Yes, very concise, lucid writing and a nice setup....Yes, very concise, lucid writing and a nice setup. Thanks!pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907015820258768087.post-70119661351002781172011-02-28T05:37:07.615-08:002011-02-28T05:37:07.615-08:00Tight writing, no wasted words with great dialogue...Tight writing, no wasted words with great dialogue and imagery. Bang on the money, Jimmy.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.com